Blog Post #3
December13
A couple of weeks ago, mom had to order Rodrick a new bed because he’d worn his out.so furniture guys come to take his old mattress and box spring away. When they come, Rodrick was in the middle of his after-school nap. so they took his bed away, and he just slept on the floor, right of his middle of his empty frame.
In this quote I visualize that, Rodrick’s bed was in the bad condition and its coming a part. There were some guys came and took their bed and they helped each other to move the bed. Rodrick were so tired so when they took the bed he slept in the middle of the bed frame. He was sleeping on the floor and floor were dirty. I also visualize that he was sleeping without plow and his head was on the floor.
Mohammed, while reading this I could also visualize Rodrick sleeping on a dirty floor in the middle of his bed frame. I found that quite funny! I do have a few suggestions for you and your future posts. I didn’t realize you were quoting the book until you said it at the end. Make sure you actually quote what you copy from the book and include a citation. You also had a few grammar and punctuation mistakes, I suggest rereading your post before submitting it. 🙂
That’s a very nice quote Mohammed, but what i don’t understand is; ” why did the men have to lie the kid on the dirty floor, why couldn’t they lie him on the sofa?” and what did the mother of the boy say to the men?”. To me i could say that was very mean of them 🙁 . If it was their kid, what could they have done?
Nice blog all the same:)
i think this person has to work a little bit on his grammar, eventhough everything make sence.
When entering a quote, make sure to cite the quote and use quotation marks. However, you visualized that part of the book very well. So well that it was easy for me to visualize it too. This book seems very interesting. What is it called?
The idea of the story is well expressed but I think there are some errors one would be that while writing a paragraph the beginning part should be indented. The past and present tense have been mixed. Some of the grammar is wrong. Other then these effects the writing is clear about the main idea.
My bad i forgot to indent the paragraph that i just wrote.
I read this book before it was one of the coolest books because it touches on everything dealing with a brother. The way the go and how they put it together many can have a person connection with this book.
You did good using the strategy, but make sure to check your work before posting it.
I like your approach evoking image in my mind. I could feel how the character you showed felt.
this blog is good to visualize how Rodrick is a lazy person
I can see that Rodrick’s bed worn out, so mom brought him a new one. He slept in the middle of the empty frame because he was so tired and couldn’t wait for a new bed.
I like how you visualize the scene,but your grammar mistakes are disturbing the reader.
you’re post is understandable but you have some grammar mistakes but i can still understand what you’re saying.