Back In Black: questioning
March24
I am very curious about a couple things that are happening in the book, things that need clarification.
1) What exactly does Cammie want from Sam and Anna?
2) Why does she hate Anna so much?
3) When is Anna going to call Ben?
4) How come Ben hasn’t called Anna, he probably knows his father talked to Anna.
5) Will Anna go on the “senior trip” to Las Vegas?
6) I wonder why I haven’t been introduced to Anna’s family yet.
7) When will Sam stop being jealous of Poppy, her stepmother.
8) I wonder if Sam’s father will start to spend more time with her.
This sounds like a very interesting book with mystery and drama and maybe even some romance. You make it seem very imformative and clear when you use the names of people instead of saying them or they. Something you could do to improve your blog post is put the name of the book and author. Some people may get interested in your book and they could want to read it, but since the title and author isn’t written, people won’t know what book to look for. Another thing you could do is put a quote from the book in there and cite your quote so you can get full points. Some thing that I liked about your blog post is that u wonder about things about your book instead of just asking why, what, when, where, and how questions.
You did very well at asking questions that will help your comprehension of the book. Understanding why Cammie hates Anna might help us to understand how she feels. Understanding both sides of something aids in understanding why a person feels a certain way. Also, Anna’s family not being introduced might represent Anna being alone and independent. However, if you had put your questions in a paragraph format it would have strengthened your writing. It also would have flowed better, in my opinion.
I really like all the questions you ask yourself along the way as you read. Although you should write in paragraph form as you write your blog post, rather than a list. I do not know much about the book but it sounds like it can be pretty confusing since they seem to not have been clear with some of the important parts. I feel like Anna seems to be going through some sort of distress and resorts to her friends to sort out a problem since it seems to be taking over her life. Also, maybe Anna’s family hasnt been introduced because it will have more relevance or be more clear later on in the book rather than early on for reasons I do not know. However, keep up the good work, just write in paragraph form! 🙂
Sounds like a good book. You ask very good questions, but it would be better if instead of listing them you could make a complete paragraph. So next time avoid listing questions. Other than that good job.