Blog Post #20
When Darren Shaw encounters his bestfriend, why are they motivated in fighting and trying to kill each other rather than working together? I understand the whole rivalry between the two clans but after not seeing each other in a long time wouldn’t they made up by now? When Mr Crepsley explains that vampires and vampanese are just like “…oil and water, we are not meant to mix”(Pg 193) does he refer to as they literally cannot co-exist or that they just choose not to? Also, when the fight is interrupted by a man who can control time and space known as Mr Destiny, he speaks of them destined to fight again, but not now. Is Mr. Destiny on the side of the vampanese or is he a mutual character, almost like an overseer? Also, Mr Crepsley seems to know a lot about him, but refuses to give out essential information that Darren should know.
Hi! I like the way you tell your story and do your work. It inspires me about how to present a post. When I write, I used to number each quotation and explain, but your method is simply a paragraph included the introductions, quotation, and explanations. Once again, thanks for the inspiration. you’re doing amazing; keep it up.
The only thing I mention is the number of your questions. If I had a good memory, Ms McPeack and Ms Kratovil have told us that whether we’ re doing questioning, our work should contain 6 to 8 questions. Be aware of that to not lose points next time.
This really sounds like a good book. Your real descriptive when it comes to the clans and Mr. Destiny. How come the clans are fighting? What provoked them? You did a great job on this Independent Reading Blog. What is the title of this book? I would really love to read this book.
Richard your post is well written and interesting. You ask some interesting questions that intrigue me. The questions that you have asked has made me want to read the book. This is because it seems like a book that makes one question what will happen next. Your post was well written however you did make a couple of mistakes. One of the mistakes is that you put the “Pg”, which I am inferring means page number, instead of the author’s last name. Also the citation is meant to go at the end of the sentence not immediately after the quote.
Sounds like a good book. You ask really good questions. I can tell that that book is interesting.
You did a good job on embeding your quotes. You explain the scene very well. You had great questions to ask. It seems like an interesting book to read. Keep up the good work.
By reading this I can paint a vivid picture of whats going on. I really like how you go into much detail about Darren Shaw and his best friend. The reason why I like this post so much is because I’m always in this predicament with my brothers every time we’er trying to do something together.