Blog Post #20 (Questioning)
March24
“Victor lay between his parents” wondering if they were dead or alive (Alexie 10).
Victor explained that all the people in the party went out on the snow. Why was the party for? I am wondered how his mom and dad didn’t went out with the party people? Why did they sleep on the party instead of having fun? Is it because that they were drunk? Did victor scared when he firsts lost his mom and dad while he was looking for them? How did he felt when he found out that they were drunk?
That is a nice questing, but you have to add little more quot to understand the reader. If you don’t add hole quote then its hard to understand. Other ways wasn’t bad at all. I rad that book and this book was so surprising. I hope you are almost done with this book. keep reading this book because the main part is coming soon. Good luck!!!!:)
I like the way how you questioned about the story. your proper grammar usages makes your question more formal. The questions that you raised summarize a certain part of the story. Your paragraph is made up of related sentences and this makes it have one main idea. Despite your strength I want you to add more quotations from the story. You also need to omit one of your grammatical error such as: “…didn’t went…”. Here you mistakenly used double past tense. Over all you did a great job in your blog post!