IRB Post #19 (evaluation)
In “Outcasts United” Chapter 12 talks about Coach Pete scheduling a meeting for the team and parents. “I cannot say it anymore, what I thought would be a championship team is now over. I quit and will never be coming back to teach such irresponsible kids .” (Chapter 12, Page 9) I would always think this book would finish up good, lately it’s jut been getting worse. Coaches are quitting and players are fighting with each other because they all go to different schools and are all different ages. Towards the end of Outcasts United, the team starts to break up and all of the players go to college. Keeping a team together is very hard, as a coach you need to bond with the players and communicating with them each week. At Chapter 13 all the parents gather together and write a letter to the community saying that starting a new will be good for the upcoming freshmen and the class of 2018.Reading this book makes me think of my team and how much I appreciate my friendships with them, they are all my family. A book can change your thoughts how you view your team, friends, and family, always be nice and respect them because they will do the same in the future for you.
I really like how you evaluated the story; you did a very good job. I like how you summarized the entire story. You used “hard” to describe how difficult it is to work together as a team and I think that was very good. I like how you related the book to your personal life, that was perfect. When you are citing a book, you should only use the authors last name and the page number. You even went a step ahead to make a connection: I am impressed. Keep up with your hardwork, that was an excellent work done.
I really like how you evaluated the story; you did a very good job. I like how you summarized the entire story. You used “hard” to describe how difficult it is to work together as a team and I think that was very good. I like how you related the book to your personal life, that was perfect. When you are citing a book, you should only use the authors last name and the page number. You even went a step ahead to make a connection: I am impressed. Keep up with your hard work, that was an excellent work done.
I like your evaluation, and it reminded me when I was reading about a book similar to yours and it is in fact hard keeping a team together in rough times and other things. But when you think about its good to have relationship with your team and not like this team. So good job I like your evaluation.