IRB#20 Question
During this time Conan is finding the missing girl and her name is Amy as his search continue he encounter murders again. His friends are afraid to continuing the quest with him so I’m curious Will he still want to find Amy? or Will he stop and look for someone else to help him? but now I find it pretty easy since as he said ” Shut up, I will never giving up finding her” (Aoyama 18). This pretty much clearly explain how he feel about her as a friend. In the process of finding clue to find Amy he remember where she was left off since he have the ability to remember things very quickly and accurate. As they continue to search one of the friend call out ” This clip must be from that rich’s man call” (Aoyama 25). This could lead them to her since is a tracking device he used luckily slip in Amy pocket but now that she drop it What will happen to Amy? Will they make it in time to save her? or even How will Conan come up a plan to save her?
First off, your book sounds very mysterious and interesting. You should try putting down the author and title of the book for others to check them out. I also like how you blended your questions into your thoughts. Your curiosity about the ending sounds just like me, I would ask my self if they would make it in time also. You also cited correctly which is something I need work on. In overall your blog post is well organized and strong.
Your description is very detailed. It seems like a good book to read. Did you learn something reading this book? Reading this description I imagine someone not giving up and a good friend who is hurt. I suggest putting the book title just in case someone reads your blog and like what they read and want to read it next. This book seems like every page you read you will want to keep on reading to know what is going to happen next.
This is a good blog post because you used quotes from the book. You do have some sentences that are written incorrect and need to be improved. It seems like this book is very good because it makes the reader think what the next step will be. What book is this? I like how you asked more than one question, you used examples also. The only thing you need to focus on is the grammar problems, they can affect your writing in many ways. Re-read your post over before submitting it so it makes sense and you’ll get a better grade on it also.