Blog Post #10 Visualization
“I can tell you how she looked that bright February morning when she stepped out into the new sun, as the snow was falling off all the roofs, as she went out to buy something for a dress she was making. For a special dinner we had been married for three years.”
1) I can see the beautiful nature and the sun rises in the morning.
2) I can visualize her smiles and how her husband was watched her with love.
3) I imagine how they lived a happy married life.
” That night at home I cried for the first time since Jacky’s death. I cried for hours, thinking about my whole life with her, all the good moments, and the emptiness I knew I’d really been trying to cover up. I have never cried as much before or since. For her. For us. For our dream. For me…”
4) I see a man cry and a lot of tears on his face.
5) I see the red eyes and the white face.
6) I see him drink alcohol to forget the death of his wife.
7) I can imagine that night, it was sad and dark.
i like how you explained the Quote, and i like what you visualized in your own words.
Indeed Jemila, the death of a loved one,especially those close to you can tear you down,it can make you do things which you have never thought of doing. Nice blog ny the way 🙂
The book that your reading seems really sad and interesting .I would love to know what happens next. This book kind of reminds me of the book that I’m reading called The Half-Life of Planets.
Hello Jamila, nice job you have a good visualization because you have evidences form your book, and after it you use your imagination to think about it. Keep going I know you are a student who work hard. I like how you did the second part of your visualization. I think that it is so hard when someone that we love died because we know that we will not see him/her again, but we have to know that it will happen sooner or later in our life. We have to be strong when it will happen.
I can see that there was a lot of emotion that night.
Hi Jemilla,
You visualization is very good. I also imagined how the book story is like, based of your writing. My opinion for you is to change your style, instead of just listing your thoughts as a numeric which is what you did, It is better to write as a paragraph. Your quots are good too but you also should embed it with your own words. Next time try to change these things, Except this things, everyting looks good. Keep Up!, Thanks.
This book seems to be very interesting! I thing you did a great job in describing the scene and trying to imagine the characters’ feelings.