It took Michael three hours on a Greyhound bus to get the Bowling Green, which was half way to Nashville.  Had his mom or dad driven him to Bowling Green, it would have only taken an hour.  The whole trip there, Michael kept wondering if his twenty five year old brother, Bobby, would be there to get him.  As the bus pulled into the station, Michael looked out the window to see if he saw his brother.  All of a sudden, he saw his brother driving up to the station in a new Oldsmobile 442.  Michael thought to himself, “I go a cool brother .  Look at those smooth wheels.  Bot what made him the coolest to me was just that he was there.  he had come through for me.”

Justin Gerade- Evaluation