Reaching
Invisible hands
Far into the depths
Of black water
Flailing fingers
Struggle to feel
Grasping
For something
Not there
I recede
Grasping for a breath
Of crystal air
Shaking away the bitter cold
Of nothingness
Reaching
Invisible hands
Far into the depths
Of black water
Flailing fingers
Struggle to feel
Grasping
For something
Not there
I recede
Grasping for a breath
Of crystal air
Shaking away the bitter cold
Of nothingness
Wow! These images are unique and memorable!
I agree, very powerful and vivid choice of words. Well Done!
I can feel the desperation of the moment.