The stars are all around me the brightest one is the one I need its light licks my surface as I spin endlessly all the little people walk upon my skin like bugs the water hugs my surface I feel very snug suddenly I am a flame there is so much pain centered around a large island I don't even know its name when it ends all the bugs on the island are gone the silence that sears can't be sated or satisfied the little people are hurting each other it isn't glorified don't they realize that they're all in this together like a small lost boat on the open sea how difficult can it be to unify and cut their tethers they're all just tiny people sitting on a little rock floating through space like a small lost boat on the open sea
I like your use of figurative language!